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Post by vamp on Jul 1, 2010 14:02:18 GMT 12
Some of these are from personal experience, others were written for friends Depression
The world feels cold My heart feels hollow No dreams left to hold I can barely swallow The world disappears Yet, there’s nothing to see My thoughts bring me tears My mind is despairing but free.
A Broken Heart
The world becomes a darkened place. Walls form all around A poor young heart without a trace Of cheery beating sound. A heart may be mended Though not in quite same way By those you’ve befriended Some how, some day.
Ignorance is bliss
Ignorance is bliss Without it the mind may wander through perpetual darkness Where life seems hopeless And hope turns to nothingness Support becomes meaningless words Friends become just people in your mind you are alone
Loss of a Friend
The loss of a friend feels so cold The kind of pain that never grows old You tell yourself you never truly gave up but deep down inside you know that time is up Hope soon begins to fade til it comes to an end Sadly, some friendships, I suppose, may never mend
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Post by Sin the Keeper on Jul 1, 2010 14:23:42 GMT 12
I must say, your poems...are rather epic.
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Post by vamp on Jul 2, 2010 14:09:59 GMT 12
thanks! their not too depressing?
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Post by Sin the Keeper on Jul 2, 2010 14:50:19 GMT 12
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Post by vamp on Jul 3, 2010 3:07:25 GMT 12
And y is that?
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Post by Sin the Keeper on Jul 3, 2010 4:56:38 GMT 12
Because mine are just as depressing.
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Post by vamp on Jul 3, 2010 6:13:15 GMT 12
i've read your poetry. I don't really get the dead inside vibe that i have when i write these
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Post by Sin the Keeper on Jul 3, 2010 8:47:56 GMT 12
I don't really know how I feel when I right them, my word slip from my tongue in late night lucubration, and through the efforts a poem is forged.
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Post by magnuseagle123 on Jul 3, 2010 12:24:02 GMT 12
slip from my tongue in late night lucubration *Giggles immaturely* Anyways.. I like the poems, but they're a tad..Well, depressing. Nobody ever writes happy stuff around here. D:
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Post by Ivy on Jul 3, 2010 12:37:00 GMT 12
O___O I do! (sometimes)
Ethan. I will frame this if I get the chance.
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