Post by Gheng on Aug 9, 2010 11:31:30 GMT 12
(This is my only character, and please be lenient to whoever reads this, it's one of my first bios and is meant for a world called Corasia, so don't mind the random places in history.)
Name: Fenros Fenvor Wimbleton II
Age: 29.64
Race: Proto-Human
Gender: Male
Race Description: A Proto-Human is, As the name suggests, a human. But they have been exponentially increased in physical strength, speed, precision, and expertise. The standard model has a prepulsion system within their arms, a single power core that replaces their digestive tract, a component that enhances all brain activity and acts as the mechanical brain, and each of their muscles have been embraced with a metallic alloy that increases total body strength and stamina, along with their tendons being reinforced. The entire skeletal structure of the body is removed and replaced with a very strong alloy called Kitronion, with half the weight of aluminum and ten times the strength of refined steel, it's a metal of unbreakable bonds. The best indication of a Proto-Human, however, is the fact that their eyes are replaced with a special lens that is directly connected to their mechaical and biological brain, which acts as a system and pin-pointing machine for best accuracy. What makes these superhumans so powerful though, is the wires connected from his power source, travel through the metal in his muscles, and to his skin, lining his nervous system for increased efficiency. The power in the core travels through these wires and literally multiplies strength and speed even more, but this addition is limited, especially for the reason they use the energy for their mechanical brain as well.
Appearance: Wimbleton stands at 7'6, due to his modifications being rather tall. He weighs 470 pounds, but remains the waistline of a normal human, probably because of the metal. Wim has a black shirt and pants that are made of a stretched-out, reinforced cloth, and both have small zips for removal. Wim has a 7'4 long black leather trench coat to go over these clothes, and it is buckled closed with a matching belt with a silver lock. He wears standard military boots (All his clothing is black), and he has strong gloves with a metal outlining that could stop most blades with no injury. Wim wears a large black bandana that covers his dirty blonde hair, that the knot at the back of his head has two pieces of extra cloth that hang down to his waist, and a mask that pretty much covers his face besides the eyes. But as a replacement to his eyes, he wears black-rimmed, shining red-lensed goggles. These goggles allow him to see, have better accuracy, they can measure 'threat' levels based on his opponent's weapons, or even their body's strength and capacity. Wimbleton's goggles are also permanently anchored to his head by bolts. If you were to remove his clothing, Wim would have wires connected to his body as well, which would line his nervous system. Wim's model is special, being the first prototype of the race. He also has wire-ends that look like syringes that go down his knuckles. There are external wires that go up from the ends and latch at his back, for the purpose of optimal arm/hand power. Wim's coat has a weaved-in vertical sheath where he holds his katana. Another thing to note is Wim has three power cores instead of the original one.
Weapon: Wimbleton has a Kitronion Katana, 5'9 in total length, with the blade being 5'2 of it. The hilt was wrapped in the same cloth as his undershirt and pants. The broad-side of the blade near the hilt has an engraving in Gnomish that says, "Salvation". A very misleading cause to say the least.
Personality: Wimbleton even before the operation was a quiet person with a short qualm for violence. He never raced for a battle, but when he was thrown into one, he did not hesitate to do what he had to do. Afterwards though, he became a bit of a shut-in, because of his newfound... abilities. Over the years after the operation, he became more and more cruel, vile, and emotionless, all due to the change of his life and what happened because of it (History).
Alignment: Agressively neutral.
Strengths: Sheer power, biological immortality, overall incredible fighting skill, extremely co-ordinated, great knowledge of anatomy. And when in serious danger, Wim can overdrive his power systems and become an unstoppable force with bad side-effects later.
Weaknesses: Ice can stop his systems, limited speed without power, Fighting style becomes choppy without gloves if opponent has sharp weapon. Wim can overheat if he is in tough combat for an extended period of time.
History: Wimbleton was born at Silverfire in the Dark Ages, where Scilor ruled the Human, Dwarven and Gnomish races, and were to soon rule the Elves themselves. His mother died at birth, and his father released him into military care, and disappeared afterwards. So Wimbleton was trained since he could walk to fight, carry out any type of mission, and soon rose through the ranks to be one of the top soldiers of the village, and eventually gaining the rank of Master-Sargeant when he was 16 years old.
A few months afterwards, he was asked to attend the school's graduation party in hopes they could find a young teenager that had murdered his parents. Wim went there and met a girl called Alyshia, who was very different from the other teenagers. Love at first sight, Wim and Alyshia grew close to each other very quickly, and were soon dating just a few days after the mission. Wim found someone to hold close to, and he wouldn't have it any other way.
A year and 3 months later, Scilor's forces attacked Silverfire for the assumption they were harboring surviving Energites, a race that was considered extinct and was 'hostile to mankind'. Wim and his army fought valiantly against the tyrant, who he himself shown to the battle, but they were wiped from existance in a mere 3 hours. They found one single Energite there, and Scilor commanded he should behead the last one. As he raised his Jettison sword, Wim used every ounce of his might and managed to tackle Scilor, who has never been known before to be injured, to the ground. He then tried as hard as he could to pound his fists into Scilor's face, but he was wretched off by soldiers, and Scilor stood. He raised his hand, and his soldiers gasped as Scilor charged a power within the space between them, pure energy about to kill the rebel. Before he fired it, however, a young woman in golden armor with intact glowing wings grabbed Scilor's armor and took him into flight, and they fought like gods streaking in the night sky. Wim saw this opportunity and began killing any soldier he could. The woman fell from the sky and crashed onto Wimbleton, injuring them both. And to Wim's surprise, the woman was none other than Alyshia. Scilor prepared a devastating blast to destroy the entire village, lighting the night sky red. Wim and Alyshia fled into the forest, their hometown annihilated behind them.
They survived throughout, sharing each other's emotions and becoming even closer. When they reached Quel'Alasna, the Elven Capital, they got married, and opened a weapons shop in the lower city, where they lived selling weaponry for 2 years. But when they were nearing paying all of their debts from renting a storehouse, A gnome stole one of their higher-priced daggers, so Wimbleton went after him, all of the way out of the city and into the wild. As soon as Wim caught him and wretched the blade away, he turned and was hit with a club, knocked out cold...
Wim screamed, awaken in some kind of reinforced cave with hundreds of metal gadgets around him, and his eyesight was shaded red, with Gnomish writing screening through, which oddly he understood. He looked around and screamed more. Moving caused him unimaginable pain, and he was hooked up to equipment, his body was bloody and lined with metal, and he felt ten times heavier. Fright and pain turning into rage and anger, the lined metal upon his body begun to illuminate his surroundings, and he broke out of the metal braces on his wrists and ankles. An alarm sounded, and he ran out of the room, never looking back to the horror that befell him. Each step he took was pure agony, and he felt his eyes, seeing they were goggles. He couldn't even budge them from his head, so he just kept running, and at the end of the metal hall, Wim seen a door. Kicking it in, he seen there was a whole set of armor, mostly leather. It was unlike anything he'd seen before, but they were clothes. Slipping them on, he turned to leave when he saw a case attached to the wall next to the door. He smashed the lock, and he found a katana. He took it, left the room, and ended up fighting all the gnomish guards that were trailing him. He killed every last one of the gnomes there, and dueled with Ching, the leader of the experiment and a very skilled arcanist, for freedom. Wimbleton fled after he shattered his creator, and he's been a bounty hunter ever since, getting money for unknown reasons.
Other: Wimbleton hates gnomes [History]. You could say he is a rather greedy person, because he would do literally almost anything to get a good buck. And he has no memory of his past from the operation because of the mechanical brain, but some of the memories reappear in dreams.
Name: Fenros Fenvor Wimbleton II
Age: 29.64
Race: Proto-Human
Gender: Male
Race Description: A Proto-Human is, As the name suggests, a human. But they have been exponentially increased in physical strength, speed, precision, and expertise. The standard model has a prepulsion system within their arms, a single power core that replaces their digestive tract, a component that enhances all brain activity and acts as the mechanical brain, and each of their muscles have been embraced with a metallic alloy that increases total body strength and stamina, along with their tendons being reinforced. The entire skeletal structure of the body is removed and replaced with a very strong alloy called Kitronion, with half the weight of aluminum and ten times the strength of refined steel, it's a metal of unbreakable bonds. The best indication of a Proto-Human, however, is the fact that their eyes are replaced with a special lens that is directly connected to their mechaical and biological brain, which acts as a system and pin-pointing machine for best accuracy. What makes these superhumans so powerful though, is the wires connected from his power source, travel through the metal in his muscles, and to his skin, lining his nervous system for increased efficiency. The power in the core travels through these wires and literally multiplies strength and speed even more, but this addition is limited, especially for the reason they use the energy for their mechanical brain as well.
Appearance: Wimbleton stands at 7'6, due to his modifications being rather tall. He weighs 470 pounds, but remains the waistline of a normal human, probably because of the metal. Wim has a black shirt and pants that are made of a stretched-out, reinforced cloth, and both have small zips for removal. Wim has a 7'4 long black leather trench coat to go over these clothes, and it is buckled closed with a matching belt with a silver lock. He wears standard military boots (All his clothing is black), and he has strong gloves with a metal outlining that could stop most blades with no injury. Wim wears a large black bandana that covers his dirty blonde hair, that the knot at the back of his head has two pieces of extra cloth that hang down to his waist, and a mask that pretty much covers his face besides the eyes. But as a replacement to his eyes, he wears black-rimmed, shining red-lensed goggles. These goggles allow him to see, have better accuracy, they can measure 'threat' levels based on his opponent's weapons, or even their body's strength and capacity. Wimbleton's goggles are also permanently anchored to his head by bolts. If you were to remove his clothing, Wim would have wires connected to his body as well, which would line his nervous system. Wim's model is special, being the first prototype of the race. He also has wire-ends that look like syringes that go down his knuckles. There are external wires that go up from the ends and latch at his back, for the purpose of optimal arm/hand power. Wim's coat has a weaved-in vertical sheath where he holds his katana. Another thing to note is Wim has three power cores instead of the original one.
Weapon: Wimbleton has a Kitronion Katana, 5'9 in total length, with the blade being 5'2 of it. The hilt was wrapped in the same cloth as his undershirt and pants. The broad-side of the blade near the hilt has an engraving in Gnomish that says, "Salvation". A very misleading cause to say the least.
Personality: Wimbleton even before the operation was a quiet person with a short qualm for violence. He never raced for a battle, but when he was thrown into one, he did not hesitate to do what he had to do. Afterwards though, he became a bit of a shut-in, because of his newfound... abilities. Over the years after the operation, he became more and more cruel, vile, and emotionless, all due to the change of his life and what happened because of it (History).
Alignment: Agressively neutral.
Strengths: Sheer power, biological immortality, overall incredible fighting skill, extremely co-ordinated, great knowledge of anatomy. And when in serious danger, Wim can overdrive his power systems and become an unstoppable force with bad side-effects later.
Weaknesses: Ice can stop his systems, limited speed without power, Fighting style becomes choppy without gloves if opponent has sharp weapon. Wim can overheat if he is in tough combat for an extended period of time.
History: Wimbleton was born at Silverfire in the Dark Ages, where Scilor ruled the Human, Dwarven and Gnomish races, and were to soon rule the Elves themselves. His mother died at birth, and his father released him into military care, and disappeared afterwards. So Wimbleton was trained since he could walk to fight, carry out any type of mission, and soon rose through the ranks to be one of the top soldiers of the village, and eventually gaining the rank of Master-Sargeant when he was 16 years old.
A few months afterwards, he was asked to attend the school's graduation party in hopes they could find a young teenager that had murdered his parents. Wim went there and met a girl called Alyshia, who was very different from the other teenagers. Love at first sight, Wim and Alyshia grew close to each other very quickly, and were soon dating just a few days after the mission. Wim found someone to hold close to, and he wouldn't have it any other way.
A year and 3 months later, Scilor's forces attacked Silverfire for the assumption they were harboring surviving Energites, a race that was considered extinct and was 'hostile to mankind'. Wim and his army fought valiantly against the tyrant, who he himself shown to the battle, but they were wiped from existance in a mere 3 hours. They found one single Energite there, and Scilor commanded he should behead the last one. As he raised his Jettison sword, Wim used every ounce of his might and managed to tackle Scilor, who has never been known before to be injured, to the ground. He then tried as hard as he could to pound his fists into Scilor's face, but he was wretched off by soldiers, and Scilor stood. He raised his hand, and his soldiers gasped as Scilor charged a power within the space between them, pure energy about to kill the rebel. Before he fired it, however, a young woman in golden armor with intact glowing wings grabbed Scilor's armor and took him into flight, and they fought like gods streaking in the night sky. Wim saw this opportunity and began killing any soldier he could. The woman fell from the sky and crashed onto Wimbleton, injuring them both. And to Wim's surprise, the woman was none other than Alyshia. Scilor prepared a devastating blast to destroy the entire village, lighting the night sky red. Wim and Alyshia fled into the forest, their hometown annihilated behind them.
They survived throughout, sharing each other's emotions and becoming even closer. When they reached Quel'Alasna, the Elven Capital, they got married, and opened a weapons shop in the lower city, where they lived selling weaponry for 2 years. But when they were nearing paying all of their debts from renting a storehouse, A gnome stole one of their higher-priced daggers, so Wimbleton went after him, all of the way out of the city and into the wild. As soon as Wim caught him and wretched the blade away, he turned and was hit with a club, knocked out cold...
Wim screamed, awaken in some kind of reinforced cave with hundreds of metal gadgets around him, and his eyesight was shaded red, with Gnomish writing screening through, which oddly he understood. He looked around and screamed more. Moving caused him unimaginable pain, and he was hooked up to equipment, his body was bloody and lined with metal, and he felt ten times heavier. Fright and pain turning into rage and anger, the lined metal upon his body begun to illuminate his surroundings, and he broke out of the metal braces on his wrists and ankles. An alarm sounded, and he ran out of the room, never looking back to the horror that befell him. Each step he took was pure agony, and he felt his eyes, seeing they were goggles. He couldn't even budge them from his head, so he just kept running, and at the end of the metal hall, Wim seen a door. Kicking it in, he seen there was a whole set of armor, mostly leather. It was unlike anything he'd seen before, but they were clothes. Slipping them on, he turned to leave when he saw a case attached to the wall next to the door. He smashed the lock, and he found a katana. He took it, left the room, and ended up fighting all the gnomish guards that were trailing him. He killed every last one of the gnomes there, and dueled with Ching, the leader of the experiment and a very skilled arcanist, for freedom. Wimbleton fled after he shattered his creator, and he's been a bounty hunter ever since, getting money for unknown reasons.
Other: Wimbleton hates gnomes [History]. You could say he is a rather greedy person, because he would do literally almost anything to get a good buck. And he has no memory of his past from the operation because of the mechanical brain, but some of the memories reappear in dreams.
