Post by Humumad on Oct 27, 2010 12:10:38 GMT 12
*Not that anyone ever views this thread, but if you are, please know that this is a bio that is clearly for fighting, especially by a noob like me 
so go easy.*
Name: Fenros Fenvor Wimbleton II
Age: 29.64
Race: Proto-Human
Gender: Male
Race Description: A Proto-Human is, As the name suggests, a human. But they have been exponentially increased in physical strength, speed, precision, and expertise. The standard model has a prepulsion system within their arms, a single power core that replaces their digestive tract, a component that enhances all brain activity and acts as the mechanical brain, and each of their muscles have been embraced with a metallic alloy that increases total body strength and stamina, along with their tendons being reinforced. The entire skeletal structure of the body is removed and replaced with a very strong alloy called Kitronion, with half the weight of aluminum and ten times the strength of refined steel, it's a metal of unbreakable bonds. The best indication of a Proto-Human, however, is the fact that their eyes are replaced with a special lens that is directly connected to their mechaical and biological brain, which acts as a system and pin-pointing machine for best accuracy. What makes these superhumans so powerful though, is the wires connected from his power source, travel through the metal in his muscles, and to his skin, lining his nervous system for increased efficiency. The power in the core travels through these wires and literally multiplies strength and speed even more, but this addition is limited, especially for the reason they use the energy for their mechanical brain as well.
Appearance: Wimbleton stands at 7'6, due to his modifications being rather tall. He weighs 470 pounds, but remains the waistline of a normal human, probably because of the metal. Wim has a black shirt and pants that are made of a stretched-out, reinforced cloth, and both have small zips for removal. Wim has a 7'4 long black leather trench coat to go over these clothes, and it is buckled closed with a matching belt with a silver lock. He wears standard military boots (All his clothing is black), and he has strong gloves with a metal outlining that could stop most blades with no injury. Wim wears a large black bandana that covers his dirty blonde hair, that the knot at the back of his head has two pieces of extra cloth that hang down to his waist, and a mask that pretty much covers his face besides the eyes. But as a replacement to his eyes, he wears black-rimmed, shining red-lensed goggles. These goggles allow him to see, have better accuracy, they can measure 'threat' levels based on his opponent's weapons, or even their body's strength and capacity. Wimbleton's goggles are also permanently anchored to his head by bolts. If you were to remove his clothing, Wim would have wires connected to his body as well, which would line his nervous system. Wim's model is special, being the first prototype of the race. He also has wire-ends that look like syringes that go down his knuckles. There are external wires that go up from the ends and latch at his back, for the purpose of optimal arm/hand power. Wim's coat has a weaved-in vertical sheath where he holds his katana. Another thing to note is Wim has three power cores instead of the original one.
Weapon: Wimbleton has a Kitronion Katana, 5'9 in total length, with the blade being 5'2 of it. The hilt was wrapped in the same cloth as his undershirt and pants. The broad-side of the blade near the hilt has an engraving in a foreign language that says, "Salvation". A very misleading cause to say the least.
Personality: Wimbleton even before the operation was a quiet person with a short qualm for violence. He never raced for a battle, but when he was thrown into one, he did not hesitate to do what he had to do. Afterwards though, he became a bit of a shut-in, because of his newfound... abilities. Over the years after the operation, he became more and more cruel, vile, and emotionless, all due to the change of his life and what happened because of it (History).
Alignment: Agressively neutral.
Strengths: Sheer power, overall incredible fighting skill, extremely co-ordinated, great knowledge of anatomy. And when in serious danger, Wim can overdrive his power systems and become an unstoppable force with bad side-effects later.
Weaknesses: Ice can stop his systems, limited speed without power, Fighting style becomes choppy without gloves if opponent has sharp weapon. Wim can overheat if he is in tough combat for an extended period of time.
History: He has one but due to conflicting things and stuff because of the world I made him for, let's just say he was kidnapped after military service, got buffed up, and is now an assassin.
so go easy.*Name: Fenros Fenvor Wimbleton II
Age: 29.64
Race: Proto-Human
Gender: Male
Race Description: A Proto-Human is, As the name suggests, a human. But they have been exponentially increased in physical strength, speed, precision, and expertise. The standard model has a prepulsion system within their arms, a single power core that replaces their digestive tract, a component that enhances all brain activity and acts as the mechanical brain, and each of their muscles have been embraced with a metallic alloy that increases total body strength and stamina, along with their tendons being reinforced. The entire skeletal structure of the body is removed and replaced with a very strong alloy called Kitronion, with half the weight of aluminum and ten times the strength of refined steel, it's a metal of unbreakable bonds. The best indication of a Proto-Human, however, is the fact that their eyes are replaced with a special lens that is directly connected to their mechaical and biological brain, which acts as a system and pin-pointing machine for best accuracy. What makes these superhumans so powerful though, is the wires connected from his power source, travel through the metal in his muscles, and to his skin, lining his nervous system for increased efficiency. The power in the core travels through these wires and literally multiplies strength and speed even more, but this addition is limited, especially for the reason they use the energy for their mechanical brain as well.
Appearance: Wimbleton stands at 7'6, due to his modifications being rather tall. He weighs 470 pounds, but remains the waistline of a normal human, probably because of the metal. Wim has a black shirt and pants that are made of a stretched-out, reinforced cloth, and both have small zips for removal. Wim has a 7'4 long black leather trench coat to go over these clothes, and it is buckled closed with a matching belt with a silver lock. He wears standard military boots (All his clothing is black), and he has strong gloves with a metal outlining that could stop most blades with no injury. Wim wears a large black bandana that covers his dirty blonde hair, that the knot at the back of his head has two pieces of extra cloth that hang down to his waist, and a mask that pretty much covers his face besides the eyes. But as a replacement to his eyes, he wears black-rimmed, shining red-lensed goggles. These goggles allow him to see, have better accuracy, they can measure 'threat' levels based on his opponent's weapons, or even their body's strength and capacity. Wimbleton's goggles are also permanently anchored to his head by bolts. If you were to remove his clothing, Wim would have wires connected to his body as well, which would line his nervous system. Wim's model is special, being the first prototype of the race. He also has wire-ends that look like syringes that go down his knuckles. There are external wires that go up from the ends and latch at his back, for the purpose of optimal arm/hand power. Wim's coat has a weaved-in vertical sheath where he holds his katana. Another thing to note is Wim has three power cores instead of the original one.
Weapon: Wimbleton has a Kitronion Katana, 5'9 in total length, with the blade being 5'2 of it. The hilt was wrapped in the same cloth as his undershirt and pants. The broad-side of the blade near the hilt has an engraving in a foreign language that says, "Salvation". A very misleading cause to say the least.
Personality: Wimbleton even before the operation was a quiet person with a short qualm for violence. He never raced for a battle, but when he was thrown into one, he did not hesitate to do what he had to do. Afterwards though, he became a bit of a shut-in, because of his newfound... abilities. Over the years after the operation, he became more and more cruel, vile, and emotionless, all due to the change of his life and what happened because of it (History).
Alignment: Agressively neutral.
Strengths: Sheer power, overall incredible fighting skill, extremely co-ordinated, great knowledge of anatomy. And when in serious danger, Wim can overdrive his power systems and become an unstoppable force with bad side-effects later.
Weaknesses: Ice can stop his systems, limited speed without power, Fighting style becomes choppy without gloves if opponent has sharp weapon. Wim can overheat if he is in tough combat for an extended period of time.
History: He has one but due to conflicting things and stuff because of the world I made him for, let's just say he was kidnapped after military service, got buffed up, and is now an assassin.